Aurora Clubbing

Photo graphs of eyes are very interesting and awesome. However, this close up, some edits must be made to the picture. The eye seems almost foggy. The reflection in the eye, while i suppose could for some be artistic, ruins for me the idea that you are, as an artist, attempting to focus only on the eye and the skin around it. I do not know if you can edit these in some sort of program, but if you have the ability, I would do that. It is unfortunate if you have to just take the picture again and again, but if you want this piece to be at its best, that is what i would do. Lastly, the makeup on the top eyelid fades out and there are no sparkles on it. If you are going to use makeup, make sure that when it fades, it has the same effect all around. Additionally, the pink makeup and the black makeup have different stop points and fade arcs. I believe having a uniform fade style is better over all.