Vision: I think the lip color and liquid eyeliner are simply divine! The gloss is so luminous and I'm not sure if you did it on purpose but you added small hairs at the bottom of your lip which go well with the kiwi because they do have that on their skin! However, I take the kiwi slices as a bit of an eye sore, or at least the way they're presented on your lips. Maybe if they were smaller and arranged more, it'd be nicer to look at.
Originality: The design might be original, but the concept might not be. However, I think it's lovely regardless and it looks nice compared to other lip arts i've seen.
Technique: I love the gloss and eyeliner seeds, however your technique of the kiwis look a little too big and broad for your lovely lips. Personally, maybe I would've liked to see a little more brown at the edges or something to give it that final kiwi kick!
Impact: As you know from comments below, this was lovely and I'm going to follow you because of it! Keep up the good work, and continue your art! <3
Wow! This has truly amazed me today. I have never seen such an array of hues and variation in tones in one set of lips before. This is truly a work of art. The black "seeds" and the kiwi slices give it a whimsical yet realistic touch, and the gradation from light to dark moving from the center of the lips outwards is reminiscent of the light center and dark edges of the kiwi fruit itself. The iridescence adds the perfect touch, and gives the lips a depth that otherwise would have been lacking. This depth helps counteract the three-dimensional quality of the kiwi slices, and gives an overall sense of balance. The artist put much time and dedication into this, and it truly shows. Job well done, my friend!
Originality: The design might be original, but the concept might not be. However, I think it's lovely regardless and it looks nice compared to other lip arts i've seen.
Technique: I love the gloss and eyeliner seeds, however your technique of the kiwis look a little too big and broad for your lovely lips. Personally, maybe I would've liked to see a little more brown at the edges or something to give it that final kiwi kick!
Impact: As you know from comments below, this was lovely and I'm going to follow you because of it! Keep up the good work, and continue your art! <3
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