I like this look right here. It looks kinda cute and really pretty. I really love how you added all the soft light pink colors onto your lips. The colors created some texture that really reminded me of cotton candy and bubble gum so you have done a good job right there. I also like how you put some cotton candy between your lips, too. It kinda adds some kind of effect to this.
Anyways, hopefully, I didn't rate this too high or too low and I hope that you like this critique. Hope you have a nice day now!
I know that your lip art is all about lip art, but I would like to see this with the entire face. I understand that it's a soft candy type thing you're going for based on the title and the candy in your mouth, but I think the paleness and slight grey in the color might look more washed out or, worst case scenario, corpse-like.
I don't know what it is about this one, but looking at it is like coming out of the theater after an amazing movie. There's just something in there that feels... deeper than what it seems. It's safe to say I love it!