This is very cool! I like the effects that you did with the smoke and the same colors of the lipsticks. I like that the smoke has a glowing tint to it. It makes it look very cool. It looks however like your skin has a sickly looking tint to it and it might be the lighting or it could be the effect of the smoke you added. I like the colors of the lips though but maybe have the sizes of the colors a bit more equal. This is a very cool lip design and colors. Good Job on this
While I like the concept behind this and the lips are well done, I feel like the editing really takes away from the picture. Even on a second glace it looks like you've edited in the color of the lips, rather than using lipstick and minimal retouching. I would suggest if you attempt to do another similar picture to actually breathe the smoke our of your mouth rather than photoshopping it in, and also to perhaps use a different technique in photoshopt to get the different colors of smoke. The skin could also use a little work too, try dodging or burning or using the patch and healing brush tools. I understand that this is a picture displaying the makeup, however I feel like the rest of the image takes away too much from that.